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A diamond tear falls from her emerald eye, sliding down her golden face, and landing with a loud clang on the black floor. She glances down at her sliver clothing, an eternal sadness settling in her ruby heart. The stain sword pinned against her body under her arm is useless now. She has failed, being nothing but gold, silver, gems, and copper curls. She is a statue in his presence, a prisoner in his dark fortress.


A small beetle flies a top her nose. It is an old friend repaying a favor. Inside, she smiles, the dread evaporating.


The gold becomes flesh, the silver becomes cloth, and the copper becomes beautiful hair. The diamond on the floor is gone, in its place a small dot of water shines. She draws her sword and steps down from her pedestal, walking over to his turned back. She taps her foot, waiting. He whirls around, staring into her firm eyes.


He blinks.


She raises her sword and strikes hard. He falls to the floor, dead and defeated. With a simple word, the body vanishes. Outside, she is greeted as a hero.


Yet she is faceless.

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I randomly wrote it after a dream I had, and I really really like it. Critizise it please? I really appreiciate it.
:iconnachosmayfly:
Oh, man. I like this a crazy lot and I don't know much about writing so I can't say much but I think this is so pretty good stuff. The first paragraph was really descriptive and I was all like 'lol' but, yeah. Gloriousnesssss. It was GOLDEN
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~Zarisla Apr 21, 2012  Student General Artist
dude
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thanks
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